Crashing meteors which lead to you pushing through the earth is an interesting response to the prompt, Jama. You has some interesting word choices like glistening and transparent that added to your story. Dd you mean wandering – walking or wondering – thinking? I liked the connection to geography lessons! Read the last two sentences again. Should the last sentence be two sentences? Make sure that the words you write mean what you want to say. I enjoyed reading your 100WC.
Crashing meteors which lead to you pushing through the earth is an interesting response to the prompt, Jama. You has some interesting word choices like glistening and transparent that added to your story. Dd you mean wandering – walking or wondering – thinking? I liked the connection to geography lessons! Read the last two sentences again. Should the last sentence be two sentences? Make sure that the words you write mean what you want to say. I enjoyed reading your 100WC.