I love Hansel and Gretel and I am sure that a bunny would have been likely to eat those crumbs in the original too! Just remember you have 100 words, so use all of them. Perhaps you could have mentioned to house made of lollies? Overall, I liked how you have changed the story and made it your own!
I love Hansel and Gretel and I am sure that a bunny would have been likely to eat those crumbs in the original too! Just remember you have 100 words, so use all of them. Perhaps you could have mentioned to house made of lollies? Overall, I liked how you have changed the story and made it your own!