its good but there is some part that i don t understand quite well uit might be my fault because i am from portugal and i dont understand things sometimes but its good !!!!
I liked your adjectives like [Dark] and your use of the bold words but I think you could use even more better adjectives e.g As I was walking through the immense, damp woods
Well done on your 100 word challenge Aysia, you left me wondering what happened next! I liked your use of punctuation and how you slowly worked up to the SPLASH!
This is a nice blog Aysia.
Abbas
its good but there is some part that i don t understand quite well uit might be my fault because i am from portugal and i dont understand things sometimes but its good !!!!
Dear Aysia,
I liked your adjectives like [Dark] and your use of the bold words but I think you could use even more better adjectives e.g As I was walking through the immense, damp woods
Well done on your 100 word challenge Aysia, you left me wondering what happened next! I liked your use of punctuation and how you slowly worked up to the SPLASH!