Hello there! Sounds like you had one strange night in this piece of writing. I like the way you have tried to create mood and atmosphere with your choice of words. Remember it is VERY important to reread your writing and make sure that it makes sense for the reader. Punctuation is important too.
Keep writing!
Mary (Team 100WC)
Australia
Hello there! Sounds like you had one strange night in this piece of writing. I like the way you have tried to create mood and atmosphere with your choice of words. Remember it is VERY important to reread your writing and make sure that it makes sense for the reader. Punctuation is important too.
Keep writing!
Mary (Team 100WC)
Australia