I saw a hand sticking out of the sand

Posted on May 10, 2013 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to I saw a hand sticking out of the sand

  1. ujamka says:
    May 13, 2013 at 6:38 pm

    That is a very exciting beginning for a story! Think about adding some speech marks to help us see when your characters are speaking.

  2. lartl says:
    May 14, 2013 at 8:48 pm

    Its just to “WOW” for my liking.

  3. lewie says:
    May 16, 2013 at 5:11 pm

    1o/10 for wow factor Ahmed.
    By Ellis

  4. keenz says:
    May 24, 2013 at 3:51 pm

    “Excellent I’am absoulotly amazed at that peice of writing. Specially the title.

    by Zubeyda

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