A strange story 3

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4 Responses to A strange story 3

  1. akilcoyne says:

    “Walking like paradise”. Wow Juwon! I love that simile.
    Make sure to read your work back at the end before blogging though.
    Try to hit the space bar 2 times after a full stop.
    There is so much improvement in your writing since you started blogging.
    Well done.
    Mr Kilcoyne

  2. wills says:

    THAT WAS NICE I REALLY LIKED IT THER SO CUTE

    FROM SHANTAE

  3. lewie says:

    You took Marks story of Australia.I love it.
    By Ellis

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