The Rattle

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  1. Mrs Tucker (100WC Team) says:

    Hi Salman, well done for entering the 100WC this week, there were 1600 entries this time!
    What I like about your writing…
    You have a beginning, middle and end to your story.
    You have created mystery and suspense in your writing.
    What I’d like to see more of…
    Do you think you could use a question in your writing to involve your readers? What do you think?
    Well done and keep writing. 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team) Wirral, UK.

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