Well done for entering this week’s 100 word challenge, you have used the prompt well in your story. It is great to see you using speech in your story as it is always good to use a range of punctuation. Don’t forget names need capital letters even mid sentence. It is lovely how you also included a picture.
Keep up the good work and don’t forget the best thing about writing stories is that you can leet your imagination take you anywhere.
Hello Haroon,
Well done for entering this week’s 100 word challenge, you have used the prompt well in your story. It is great to see you using speech in your story as it is always good to use a range of punctuation. Don’t forget names need capital letters even mid sentence. It is lovely how you also included a picture.
Keep up the good work and don’t forget the best thing about writing stories is that you can leet your imagination take you anywhere.
thank you Ms Woodgate