Hi Rami…thank you for sharing your 100 word challenge. I’m glad that it was a human you heard, I thought a wolf was going to jump out! It’s good to see you expanding some of your clauses by saying why you were going to the cemetery. To try and make this even scarier maybe you could use some terrifying adjectives to describe what you can hear etc.
I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing!
Mrs Jones
100WC Team 🙂
I could faint Rami!!Awesome
I am so scared !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a horror i can`t belive you did that wow rami by Isla
Hi Rami…thank you for sharing your 100 word challenge. I’m glad that it was a human you heard, I thought a wolf was going to jump out! It’s good to see you expanding some of your clauses by saying why you were going to the cemetery. To try and make this even scarier maybe you could use some terrifying adjectives to describe what you can hear etc.
I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing!
Mrs Jones
100WC Team 🙂