salman you quite of scared me I quite like all yore iders and yore ajectives and yore super spooky night. That scared me because you had berglers in yore story well done salman.
Hello Salman, oooh this challenge is a very scary one! I loved the idea of the creepers and even better when the main character was pout collecting blueberries he realised that the creepers were coming from the house he had built! This could be the beginning of a great adventure story as although you finished quickly by saying the adventure was over..perhaps you could have left the reader wondering? Well done and keep writing 🙂
What a “creepy”story. Those Creepers in Minecraft can be tricky. Make sure you close your door next time. Great conclusion sentence. You really let your readers know the story is over. I’m not sure ravaged was quite the correct word to use. We’re you ravaged by the creepers, or did they ravage you?
You really scared me Salman
salman you quite of scared me I quite like all yore iders and yore ajectives and yore super spooky night. That scared me because you had berglers in yore story well done salman.
Hello Salman, oooh this challenge is a very scary one! I loved the idea of the creepers and even better when the main character was pout collecting blueberries he realised that the creepers were coming from the house he had built! This could be the beginning of a great adventure story as although you finished quickly by saying the adventure was over..perhaps you could have left the reader wondering? Well done and keep writing 🙂
What a “creepy”story. Those Creepers in Minecraft can be tricky. Make sure you close your door next time. Great conclusion sentence. You really let your readers know the story is over. I’m not sure ravaged was quite the correct word to use. We’re you ravaged by the creepers, or did they ravage you?
I liked the sudtitell and the ajectivs and I likt sudanllay bete fan the sub titell
your story is awesome but next time try to add a couple more descriptive words.