Thanks for your awesome story. I like the bright colours and the names of your characters. Next time, use lower case letters when doing your publishing because it makes the reader feel like they are being shouted out. I look forward to reading another one of your stories
You’ve used some really interesting describing words in your writing Jama. I like “annoying” and “scruffy” and the alliteration of “class clown”. I also love the names of your characters – they made me smile! Well done. But, I’m afraid I can’t see how it links to the prompt which was the picture of the legs? Also, the writing would be much easier to read if you left one space after a comma, and two spaces after a full stop.
Keep writing and I look forward to reading another of your stories soon.
Thanks for your awesome story. I like the bright colours and the names of your characters. Next time, use lower case letters when doing your publishing because it makes the reader feel like they are being shouted out. I look forward to reading another one of your stories
Very good I like your writing
but you comers.
You’ve used some really interesting describing words in your writing Jama. I like “annoying” and “scruffy” and the alliteration of “class clown”. I also love the names of your characters – they made me smile! Well done. But, I’m afraid I can’t see how it links to the prompt which was the picture of the legs? Also, the writing would be much easier to read if you left one space after a comma, and two spaces after a full stop.
Keep writing and I look forward to reading another of your stories soon.
OK!!!!!!!!!!