Hi Aljahiz – thanks for your 100WC story. I could see you had a lot of ideas to fit into just 100 words. It is good idea to read over your story and check for punctuation – jack = Jack. It is also good to refine your ideas and pick up the main story from the prompt. I enjoyed your story and hope to read more of them.
Wow! You put so much energy into your writing- I’m exhausted just reading it! This 100WC reminded me of Lewis Carroll- full of abstract imagery that put pictures into the reader’s head. A lumberjack called Jack? Yeah- that’s pretty funny to me too. Nice job.
Hi Aljahiz – thanks for your 100WC story. I could see you had a lot of ideas to fit into just 100 words. It is good idea to read over your story and check for punctuation – jack = Jack. It is also good to refine your ideas and pick up the main story from the prompt. I enjoyed your story and hope to read more of them.
Smart writing Al Jahiz
Wow! You put so much energy into your writing- I’m exhausted just reading it! This 100WC reminded me of Lewis Carroll- full of abstract imagery that put pictures into the reader’s head. A lumberjack called Jack? Yeah- that’s pretty funny to me too. Nice job.
Fiona (Team 100wc)
I LOVE IT ALJAHIZ