Paula, I’m so proud of you to have written such a quality story at the end of our “Dilemmas” unit.
The way you have used your senses to create atmosphere and feeling is wonderful.
I particularly love the part that says “I tasted smoke at the back of my throat”.
Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to seeing your books on the shelves of Waterstones!
Mr Kilcoyne
Paula, I love this story I feel like I’m really there. I especially like how you described going into the living room and the sofa. Well done my class were enthralled!!
Mr Hacking
Paula, I’m so proud of you to have written such a quality story at the end of our “Dilemmas” unit.
The way you have used your senses to create atmosphere and feeling is wonderful.
I particularly love the part that says “I tasted smoke at the back of my throat”.
Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to seeing your books on the shelves of Waterstones!
Mr Kilcoyne
Very dramatic Paula
By Ellis
Paula, I love this story I feel like I’m really there. I especially like how you described going into the living room and the sofa. Well done my class were enthralled!!
Mr Hacking