Well done on your entry Suphyre. I liked your description, you gave me a great mental picture of what was happening. I think your piece would benefit if you had a final read through at the end and check the spelling and looked for punctuation that is missing. Keep it up.
Well done on your entry Suphyre. I liked your description, you gave me a great mental picture of what was happening. I think your piece would benefit if you had a final read through at the end and check the spelling and looked for punctuation that is missing. Keep it up.
WELL DONE SUPHYRE