dawn of the dinosaurs

9 Responses to dawn of the dinosaurs

1. Kate D says:

   May 2, 2012 at 10:25 am

   I enjoyed reading your story Lily and I’m looking forward to the next part. I wonder what will happen?
2. Katie says:

   May 8, 2012 at 3:09 pm

   I enjoyed your story too Lily, Sid the Sloth made me laugh.
3. nmahabeer says:

   May 10, 2012 at 12:59 pm

   You made very good use of alliterations Lily – I can see you as an author in the making 🙂
4. lillc says:

   May 10, 2012 at 1:00 pm

   that is very good work about dinosaurs.
5. taylr says:

   May 10, 2012 at 1:00 pm

   That’s A Wonderful Story Lily, I Really Want To Know What Will Happen Next.
6. wilsm says:

   May 10, 2012 at 1:01 pm

   I love it well done 🙂
7. azimo says:

   May 10, 2012 at 1:15 pm

   That is a very descriptive story Lily. Hopefully I can read more!
8. imraa says:

   May 10, 2012 at 1:17 pm

   I am impressed with your work. Its so good as if I was watched the movie. Well done!
9. Shana says:

   May 10, 2012 at 3:26 pm

   (I like that Lilly )

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