Grace, I loved reading this
You’ve used some really lively vocabulary as well as taking care with your punctuation.
Although it’s a ten minute write it could be the start of a longer story.
It certainly had me wondering what the trip was all about!
Well done. A really promising start to your blogging career.
Mr Kilcoyne
Grace, I loved reading this
You’ve used some really lively vocabulary as well as taking care with your punctuation.
Although it’s a ten minute write it could be the start of a longer story.
It certainly had me wondering what the trip was all about!
Well done. A really promising start to your blogging career.
Mr Kilcoyne
This is a clever idea for a story – you have a dream about something scary and then the dream starts to come true. Keep on blogging!