Wow! You certainly built the tension in your 100WC Asyia: Well done! I like the image of all her stress hives going to pop!
To improve your work, make sure you read through carefully and work out where your full stops should go: When you have this sussed I think your writing will be even more fantastic: Well Done. 🙂
Wow! You certainly built the tension in your 100WC Asyia: Well done! I like the image of all her stress hives going to pop!
To improve your work, make sure you read through carefully and work out where your full stops should go: When you have this sussed I think your writing will be even more fantastic: Well Done. 🙂