Ayisha, this is such a wonderful piece of Literacy!
All these ideas in just ten miniuutes of writing. Very impressive. You have really made some adventurous word choices and used some lovely adverbs, adjectives and verbs. I particularly like “numb”. A very descriptive word to use. To make it even better, you could take extra care with your spelling.
Well done.
Mr Kilcoyne
Ayisha, this is such a wonderful piece of Literacy!
All these ideas in just ten miniuutes of writing. Very impressive. You have really made some adventurous word choices and used some lovely adverbs, adjectives and verbs. I particularly like “numb”. A very descriptive word to use. To make it even better, you could take extra care with your spelling.
Well done.
Mr Kilcoyne
Lovely TMW Ayisha hope to see more
Goodness Ayisha! What an adventure! I’m not surprised you were shattered. You have made me feel quite exhausted 🙂