What a great poem. It really made me laugh! The layout was very good and I liked the way you used the star images to illustrate the poem. I’ll look forward to reading more of these on the blog.
Wow! What a fantastic poem. Your poem was not only entertaining but humourous. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your poems in the near future.
Lara’s blog is really AMAZING!!. But the thing is I don’t like it………………………I LOVE IT. All you were talking about was you and an Island and somehow it started to make me day dream.
Fantastic poem Lara!
A fabulous example of what you put in a blog.
You’ve really thought about how to make it easy to read too. Well done.
Mr Kilcoyne
What a great poem. It really made me laugh! The layout was very good and I liked the way you used the star images to illustrate the poem. I’ll look forward to reading more of these on the blog.
What a brilliant poem Lara you are an inspiration to one and all.Im sure one day you will become an author either of poems or stories keep it up.
Wow! What a fantastic poem. Your poem was not only entertaining but humourous. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your poems in the near future.
the work is good however I THINK T IS A LEVEL 6 YEAR WORK
Your poem is fantastic! I really like it and i hope i can read more of your poems in the future 🙂
This is a great poem Lara! I never knew you could actually create a really fantastic piece of writting on one beautiful topic. Well Done!
Lara’s blog is really AMAZING!!. But the thing is I don’t like it………………………I LOVE IT. All you were talking about was you and an Island and somehow it started to make me day dream.