Hello Tiyanna, I love the way you have made your main character wish for something so much that he tried very hard to be good and helpful. I would love to get a present of art materials even though I am not very good at painting, it is excellent fun to swish colours across a page! I really enjoyed this, well done 🙂
Ilike your 100 words challenge
i like your work it is fantastic and i like it when you were describing how the boy behaved well done tiyana well done good work.
I like your story it was fantstic i wish my christmas wish comes true.
Dear Tiyanna I like your 100 word challenge,you have worked really hard.Well done tiyanna
Hello Tiyanna, I love the way you have made your main character wish for something so much that he tried very hard to be good and helpful. I would love to get a present of art materials even though I am not very good at painting, it is excellent fun to swish colours across a page! I really enjoyed this, well done 🙂
Wonderful piece of writing Tiyanna.
By Jama