Hi Jama,
You have written a lovely story with good use of sentences and punctuation. I am not sure that it follows on for the next chapter of the comic, it is more of an independent story. Perhaps next time you could give a little more thought to the prompt. Keep up the writing.
Hi Jama,
You have written a lovely story with good use of sentences and punctuation. I am not sure that it follows on for the next chapter of the comic, it is more of an independent story. Perhaps next time you could give a little more thought to the prompt. Keep up the writing.