Absolutely stunning poetry Aminat.
I had a lump in my throat when you read this to the class today.
You have thought so much about the rhyming words. The line “the bully is never wanted
unless wanted to leave” is just wonderful.
Perhaps you could be the 4AK poet laureate?
Fabulous.
Mr Kilcoyne
Absolutely stunning poetry Aminat.
I had a lump in my throat when you read this to the class today.
You have thought so much about the rhyming words. The line “the bully is never wanted
unless wanted to leave” is just wonderful.
Perhaps you could be the 4AK poet laureate?
Fabulous.
Mr Kilcoyne
Reading this made me cry it’s amazing ,this young person is very clever and hopefully has a great future.Their parents and teacher must be very proud.
Well done, this is really great. I wanted to cry, well written. I think you should read it to the class, very proud.