Wow,
Superb story Rayne. “I saw Karen’s eyes fill with tears” is such an evocative phrase.
Make sure to organise your blogs with care. Think about paragraphing, especially when there is speech involved. New speaker, new line.
Nice to see that the standard of your blogging is improving all the time!
Mr Kilcoyne
Great work! You have created a story which ends in suspense…I am scared. I’d love to know what happens next! You have used a few good adjectives but keep working on them. Adjectives and adverbs can make all the difference to your writing. Well done!
Thank you so much for your entry, it was a real pleasure reading them.
Be sure to sign up to our mailing list and check http://www.musomic.com and our twitter page twitter.com/Musomic for updates on the MUSOMIC iPad app release.
It lets you make endless comics of your own with professional images and you can add soundtracks and publish your finished stories.
We will be hosting our own very special contest soon, so if you enjoyed this then I’m certain you’ll LOVE the next one.
Thanks again.
Ian
Creator of MUSOMIC.
@musomic
Highly anticipated comic building ‘App’ out March 2014
Wow,
Superb story Rayne. “I saw Karen’s eyes fill with tears” is such an evocative phrase.
Make sure to organise your blogs with care. Think about paragraphing, especially when there is speech involved. New speaker, new line.
Nice to see that the standard of your blogging is improving all the time!
Mr Kilcoyne
Great work! You have created a story which ends in suspense…I am scared. I’d love to know what happens next! You have used a few good adjectives but keep working on them. Adjectives and adverbs can make all the difference to your writing. Well done!
Thank you so much for your entry, it was a real pleasure reading them.
Be sure to sign up to our mailing list and check http://www.musomic.com and our twitter page twitter.com/Musomic for updates on the MUSOMIC iPad app release.
It lets you make endless comics of your own with professional images and you can add soundtracks and publish your finished stories.
We will be hosting our own very special contest soon, so if you enjoyed this then I’m certain you’ll LOVE the next one.
Thanks again.
Ian
Creator of MUSOMIC.
@musomic
Highly anticipated comic building ‘App’ out March 2014