THE HALOWEEN PARTY

Posted on October 14, 2013 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to THE HALOWEEN PARTY

  1. ZK says:
    October 14, 2013 at 5:37 pm

    Fun Aminat

  2. Anonymous says:
    October 25, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    I love your haloween party from Abdulhalim

  3. Glen Gilchrist (100WC) says:
    October 27, 2013 at 4:18 pm

    Hi

    An interesting story – well done.

    Think about your first sentence: ” Slowly the sky got darker as we were having a party at Rami’s house” – did the sky get darker because you were at Rami’s house? Maybe you needed a difference word to “as” – while maybe?

    Make sure you capitalise everyones names.

    Good stuff.

  4. gbaja says:
    March 24, 2014 at 6:54 pm

    thanx everyone

    from aminat

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