I’m one of Julia’s 100WC reviewers. You’ve written a very scary story! You have me on the edge of my seat, wondering what those evil blueprints contain. You do a good job of showing the reader how powerless you feel to stop the evil man by saying you are small and he is large. You are inside and he is outside.
Now that you have written your story, it’s time to put on your editor hat. Can you find where you’ve used a descriptive word more than once in this short story? Can you find a word that you have misspelled? Can you find a place where you’ve asked a question and used a period instead of a question mark?
You are freaking me out Sumaya
cool
wow you scared me as I looked at the picture
by Aminat
Hi Sumaya,
I’m one of Julia’s 100WC reviewers. You’ve written a very scary story! You have me on the edge of my seat, wondering what those evil blueprints contain. You do a good job of showing the reader how powerless you feel to stop the evil man by saying you are small and he is large. You are inside and he is outside.
Now that you have written your story, it’s time to put on your editor hat. Can you find where you’ve used a descriptive word more than once in this short story? Can you find a word that you have misspelled? Can you find a place where you’ve asked a question and used a period instead of a question mark?
Good work! Thank you for participating!
Jilanne Hoffmann
well done sumaya and carry the good work
well done sumaya it was scary.
Sumaya I never knew you could write a wonderfull blog.