Hello Jama, what a strange challenge you have written for us this week! I like the idea of setting the scene in a funfair where strange and colourful things can happen. ‘Jaguar’s Rule,’ sounds like a very strange game and I think I would be as scared as your character is. I do like your small details like the sunflower hat, they add to the picture you have created in my mind as I read this. Well done!
Nice work jama
Great Jama i love it
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Hello Jama, what a strange challenge you have written for us this week! I like the idea of setting the scene in a funfair where strange and colourful things can happen. ‘Jaguar’s Rule,’ sounds like a very strange game and I think I would be as scared as your character is. I do like your small details like the sunflower hat, they add to the picture you have created in my mind as I read this. Well done!
Wouldent you think that the bird would fly way as soon as you go near it. But that was REALY good and really dreamastic.
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