Hi Samantha I have just read your short story and I found it very intresting you used a wide range of voucabulry and a very good choice of words. I enjoyed reading your work it was very fasanating and you used great punctuation.
mariam
church cowley st james C.E primary school
year 6
This is a brilliant piece of work and I can tell how much work you have put into this piece of work.You have made your work very intersting.
thank you. it was done by phoebe from 2 years ago.
Wow you must have put a lot of great effort into this peice of text. Well done
thank you it was done by me 2 years go so happy that people like it.
Hi Samantha I have just read your short story and I found it very intresting you used a wide range of voucabulry and a very good choice of words. I enjoyed reading your work it was very fasanating and you used great punctuation.
mariam
church cowley st james C.E primary school
year 6
Hi Samantha I really liked your work it was really good and full of punctuation it was super great.
Hi Phoebe we read your short story and it was really good
mariam
church cowley st james primary school
year 6
very good