A really exciting story, full of adventure and descriptive vocabulary.
Two little tips: Some of the sentences need full stops, can you spot which ones? Second thing isn’t about the content, but its really hard to read the blue text on the green background. Perhaps try a different combination next week?
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Winter, Sharjah English School, UAE. (Team 100WC) says:
Hi Rami, Wow, what an exciting story. I love the use of descriptive words…Ahhhhhhhhhhhh and Weeewoooooo, A little tip would be to review your use of punctuation throughout your story, it is there in parts but not in others, can you spot where it needs to be added? Well done, you have certainly created an exciting picture 🙂
Well done Rami, I enjoyed reading your exciting 100wc. Keep up the good work.
A really exciting story, full of adventure and descriptive vocabulary.
Two little tips: Some of the sentences need full stops, can you spot which ones? Second thing isn’t about the content, but its really hard to read the blue text on the green background. Perhaps try a different combination next week?
Keep up the good work.
Hi Rami, Wow, what an exciting story. I love the use of descriptive words…Ahhhhhhhhhhhh and Weeewoooooo, A little tip would be to review your use of punctuation throughout your story, it is there in parts but not in others, can you spot where it needs to be added? Well done, you have certainly created an exciting picture 🙂